Hilarious Comedy Sketch

[WtOB?]

[lennytheweedwhacker]

[tree_]

Very subpar acting, camerawork, writing, etc...

[lennytheweedwhacker]

Very subpar acting, camerawork, writing, etc...

both of them? argo loves the one i posted

[tree_]

Both bad but first ones worse

[lennytheweedwhacker]

Both bad but first ones worse

what do we do now?

[tree_]

Teach comedy. Loud and fast!

[lennytheweedwhacker]

Teach comedy. Loud and fast!

i watched the first one again...so bad

i'm not sure i could do better though

[tree_]

Loud and fast masks poor material. Look at Friends and every other shitty sitcom ever.

[WtOB?]

i dunno, i think my skit is better than that second one. it has one joke that it retells over and over and has a predictable punchline. i find unpredictable or unexpected turns funnier. but by all means boys, tell me how it's done.

[WtOB?]

Loud and fast masks poor material.

how was it loud? and it wasn't fast until the end. calm down.

[tree_]

It wasn't. Look, I appreciate you trying to do something but I'm sorry, it just isn't loud and fast enough.

[Jorge]

Nicely done but my advice is to invest in some sound equipment, the sound really hurts it. Especially the opening scene

[lennytheweedwhacker]

not enough nudity, for one

[WtOB?]

Nicely done but my advice is to invest in some sound equipment, the sound really hurts it. Especially the opening scene

cheers brew, any suggestions on how to deal with a windy day like that? i have a somewhat acceptable rode video mic but probably would have been better to just shoot on a less windy day if i had time.

[tree_]

Don't set yourself up by calling yourself hilarious. Take j Seinfeld's advice. If you'd have said it sucks I might've liked it...

[WtOB?]

sorry i will keep the ironic thread titles to a minimum next time to make sure you don’t miss anything.

[lennytheweedwhacker]

why did the girl at the picnic table ask what the love interest's name is?

[WtOB?]

because it makes no sense.

[lennytheweedwhacker]

because it makes no sense.

hmm...ok

it'd probably be funnier if she said that after goofy walking guy said they were friends with the blonde