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Trump is barely a part of Quick Escape; he's mentioned almost as an aside.
I'm not as big a fan of the 7:00 line, but that's more because I think the line is kind of silly, rather than the fact that political content is included. Politics is certainly fair game for song content, in the same way love, religion, death, sex, or anything else is.
I'm not as big a fan of the 7:00 line, but that's more because I think the line is kind of silly, rather than the fact that political content is included. Politics is certainly fair game for song content, in the same way love, religion, death, sex, or anything else is.
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The sitting bullshit line, I can sort of agree with. But, to me, the rest of the verse and the next is also about Trump. And that stuff is fantastic.digster wrote:Trump is barely a part of Quick Escape; he's mentioned almost as an aside.
I'm not as big a fan of the 7:00 line, but that's more because I think the line is kind of silly, rather than the fact that political content is included. Politics is certainly fair game for song content, in the same way love, religion, death, sex, or anything else is.
"His best days behind him, hard to admit / Throwing angry punches with nothing to hit"
There's even some dark empathy in there from a certain point of view that I think is exactly the kind of thing Ed excels at when at his best.
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I wonder if the people who think PJ makes "cheap shots" (when their shots are rather expensive) are the same kind of people who think we shouldn't punch Nazis
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Those Trump references don't bother me at all.
The one line that does take me out of a song on this album is in River Cross:
"While the government thrives on discontent"
Really wish Ed found something else to use in place of that one.
The one line that does take me out of a song on this album is in River Cross:
"While the government thrives on discontent"
Really wish Ed found something else to use in place of that one.
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Yeah, it's a little too on the nose. The rest is fine though.EJ wrote:Those Trump references don't bother me at all.
The one line that does take me out of a song on this album is in River Cross:
"While the government thrives on discontent"
Really wish Ed found something else to use in place of that one.
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I don't mind the direct government reference but I think there could be a less weak sauce word than "discontent", from a guy who's Thing is doublespeak and propaganda; something like "disinformation" is too long but that's the kind of meaning I want there; it just feels like at the moment the line says "as the government thrives on making people sad", which is true, but not very specific and I think specificity is one thing that makes poetry poetry
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I mean "discontent" is more accurate than "making people sad" though. Disinformation, while I take your point, also isn't what this administration is after either. Disinformation is a means to an end: discontent.Ms Harmless wrote:I don't mind the direct government reference but I think there could be a less weak sauce word than "discontent", from a guy who's Thing is doublespeak and propaganda; something like "disinformation" is too long but that's the kind of meaning I want there; it just feels like at the moment the line says "as the government thrives on making people sad", which is true, but not very specific and I think specificity is one thing that makes poetry poetry
Division is maybe the most accurate word but it also doesn't quite ring in the line. Still, I hear you and I agree.
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Scrap the whole line. It's awful. Put a "hee-heeeeeee" in instead.Ms Harmless wrote:I don't mind the direct government reference but I think there could be a less weak sauce word than "discontent", from a guy who's Thing is doublespeak and propaganda; something like "disinformation" is too long but that's the kind of meaning I want there; it just feels like at the moment the line says "as the government thrives on making people sad", which is true, but not very specific and I think specificity is one thing that makes poetry poetry
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EJ wrote:Scrap the whole line. It's awful. Put a "hee-heeeeeee" in instead.Ms Harmless wrote:I don't mind the direct government reference but I think there could be a less weak sauce word than "discontent", from a guy who's Thing is doublespeak and propaganda; something like "disinformation" is too long but that's the kind of meaning I want there; it just feels like at the moment the line says "as the government thrives on making people sad", which is true, but not very specific and I think specificity is one thing that makes poetry poetry
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Weirdly, despite thinking the lyrics in "Seven O'Clock" are generally a little clumsy and hamfisted, I really like the Sitting Bullshit line -- it displays a cleverness rarely present in Pearl Jam lyrics, and the repeated use of word "sitting" has an emphatic effect. The line in "Quick Escape" doesn't stand out to me -- like McP says, it kind of flies by in a song where the lyrics aren't really front and center. There are other lyrics on the album that bug me a lot more than these two.
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I didn't even notice the reference/line in Quick Escape until someone here mentioned it.Kevin Davis wrote:Weirdly, despite thinking the lyrics in "Seven O'Clock" are generally a little clumsy and hamfisted, I really like the Sitting Bullshit line -- it displays a cleverness rarely present in Pearl Jam lyrics, and the repeated use of word "sitting" has an emphatic effect. The line in "Quick Escape" doesn't stand out to me -- like McP says, it kind of flies by in a song where the lyrics aren't really front and center. There are other lyrics on the album that bug me a lot more than these two.
Honestly, other than "Superblood Wolfmoon took her away too soon," I can't think of any on this album that stick out like a sore thumb to me. Nothing bugs me, really. Certainly no deal breakers.
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No song here is made or broken by its lyrics, I don't think. Most Pearl Jam songs aren't. But there are definitely some lyrics on Gigaton I find myself having to look past, as well as some I really like.
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they want to push capitalist and fascist policy, making some people discontent and others extremely happy, and Ed is usually better at saying thatdurdencommatyler wrote:I mean "discontent" is more accurate than "making people sad" though. Disinformation, while I take your point, also isn't what this administration is after either. Disinformation is a means to an end: discontent.Ms Harmless wrote:I don't mind the direct government reference but I think there could be a less weak sauce word than "discontent", from a guy who's Thing is doublespeak and propaganda; something like "disinformation" is too long but that's the kind of meaning I want there; it just feels like at the moment the line says "as the government thrives on making people sad", which is true, but not very specific and I think specificity is one thing that makes poetry poetry
Division is maybe the most accurate word but it also doesn't quite ring in the line. Still, I hear you and I agree.
what if he just went "mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-hee-hee! and there's no such thing as clear" (actually it's that second line that made me think "disinformation / doublespeak / deliberate obfuscation" was what he was getting at)
e.g. Boris' latest statement about Covid precautions was deliberately vague and nonsensical so that when people interpret them however they want and loads of people die, the government can blame us instead of their leadership
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Double-speak is good. And carries a nice history/reference with it. I like that.Ms Harmless wrote:they want to push capitalist and fascist policy, making some people discontent and others extremely happy, and Ed is usually better at saying thatdurdencommatyler wrote:I mean "discontent" is more accurate than "making people sad" though. Disinformation, while I take your point, also isn't what this administration is after either. Disinformation is a means to an end: discontent.Ms Harmless wrote:I don't mind the direct government reference but I think there could be a less weak sauce word than "discontent", from a guy who's Thing is doublespeak and propaganda; something like "disinformation" is too long but that's the kind of meaning I want there; it just feels like at the moment the line says "as the government thrives on making people sad", which is true, but not very specific and I think specificity is one thing that makes poetry poetry
Division is maybe the most accurate word but it also doesn't quite ring in the line. Still, I hear you and I agree.
what if he just went "mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-hee-hee! and there's no such thing as clear" (actually it's that second line that made me think "disinformation / doublespeak / deliberate obfuscation" was what he was getting at)
e.g. Boris' latest statement about Covid precautions was deliberately vague and nonsensical so that when people interpret them however they want and loads of people die, the government can blame us instead of their leadership
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ooooh yes it's the right number of syllables toodurdencommatyler wrote:Double-speak is good. And carries a nice history/reference with it. I like that.Ms Harmless wrote:they want to push capitalist and fascist policy, making some people discontent and others extremely happy, and Ed is usually better at saying thatdurdencommatyler wrote:I mean "discontent" is more accurate than "making people sad" though. Disinformation, while I take your point, also isn't what this administration is after either. Disinformation is a means to an end: discontent.Ms Harmless wrote:I don't mind the direct government reference but I think there could be a less weak sauce word than "discontent", from a guy who's Thing is doublespeak and propaganda; something like "disinformation" is too long but that's the kind of meaning I want there; it just feels like at the moment the line says "as the government thrives on making people sad", which is true, but not very specific and I think specificity is one thing that makes poetry poetry
Division is maybe the most accurate word but it also doesn't quite ring in the line. Still, I hear you and I agree.
what if he just went "mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-hee-hee! and there's no such thing as clear" (actually it's that second line that made me think "disinformation / doublespeak / deliberate obfuscation" was what he was getting at)
e.g. Boris' latest statement about Covid precautions was deliberately vague and nonsensical so that when people interpret them however they want and loads of people die, the government can blame us instead of their leadership
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Ms Harmless wrote:ooooh yes it's the right number of syllables toodurdencommatyler wrote:Double-speak is good. And carries a nice history/reference with it. I like that.Ms Harmless wrote:they want to push capitalist and fascist policy, making some people discontent and others extremely happy, and Ed is usually better at saying thatdurdencommatyler wrote:I mean "discontent" is more accurate than "making people sad" though. Disinformation, while I take your point, also isn't what this administration is after either. Disinformation is a means to an end: discontent.Ms Harmless wrote:I don't mind the direct government reference but I think there could be a less weak sauce word than "discontent", from a guy who's Thing is doublespeak and propaganda; something like "disinformation" is too long but that's the kind of meaning I want there; it just feels like at the moment the line says "as the government thrives on making people sad", which is true, but not very specific and I think specificity is one thing that makes poetry poetry
Division is maybe the most accurate word but it also doesn't quite ring in the line. Still, I hear you and I agree.
what if he just went "mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-hee-hee! and there's no such thing as clear" (actually it's that second line that made me think "disinformation / doublespeak / deliberate obfuscation" was what he was getting at)
e.g. Boris' latest statement about Covid precautions was deliberately vague and nonsensical so that when people interpret them however they want and loads of people die, the government can blame us instead of their leadership
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you had to be my Yes Mandurdencommatyler wrote:Ms Harmless wrote:ooooh yes it's the right number of syllables toodurdencommatyler wrote:Double-speak is good. And carries a nice history/reference with it. I like that.Ms Harmless wrote:they want to push capitalist and fascist policy, making some people discontent and others extremely happy, and Ed is usually better at saying thatdurdencommatyler wrote:I mean "discontent" is more accurate than "making people sad" though. Disinformation, while I take your point, also isn't what this administration is after either. Disinformation is a means to an end: discontent.Ms Harmless wrote:I don't mind the direct government reference but I think there could be a less weak sauce word than "discontent", from a guy who's Thing is doublespeak and propaganda; something like "disinformation" is too long but that's the kind of meaning I want there; it just feels like at the moment the line says "as the government thrives on making people sad", which is true, but not very specific and I think specificity is one thing that makes poetry poetry
Division is maybe the most accurate word but it also doesn't quite ring in the line. Still, I hear you and I agree.
what if he just went "mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-hee-hee! and there's no such thing as clear" (actually it's that second line that made me think "disinformation / doublespeak / deliberate obfuscation" was what he was getting at)
e.g. Boris' latest statement about Covid precautions was deliberately vague and nonsensical so that when people interpret them however they want and loads of people die, the government can blame us instead of their leadership![]()
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And happy to do itMs Harmless wrote:you had to be my Yes Mandurdencommatyler wrote:Ms Harmless wrote:ooooh yes it's the right number of syllables toodurdencommatyler wrote:Double-speak is good. And carries a nice history/reference with it. I like that.Ms Harmless wrote:they want to push capitalist and fascist policy, making some people discontent and others extremely happy, and Ed is usually better at saying thatdurdencommatyler wrote:I mean "discontent" is more accurate than "making people sad" though. Disinformation, while I take your point, also isn't what this administration is after either. Disinformation is a means to an end: discontent.Ms Harmless wrote:I don't mind the direct government reference but I think there could be a less weak sauce word than "discontent", from a guy who's Thing is doublespeak and propaganda; something like "disinformation" is too long but that's the kind of meaning I want there; it just feels like at the moment the line says "as the government thrives on making people sad", which is true, but not very specific and I think specificity is one thing that makes poetry poetry
Division is maybe the most accurate word but it also doesn't quite ring in the line. Still, I hear you and I agree.
what if he just went "mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-mmmm-hee-hee! and there's no such thing as clear" (actually it's that second line that made me think "disinformation / doublespeak / deliberate obfuscation" was what he was getting at)
e.g. Boris' latest statement about Covid precautions was deliberately vague and nonsensical so that when people interpret them however they want and loads of people die, the government can blame us instead of their leadership![]()
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