guitar_davey wrote:stip wrote:As the songs lyrics have settled in a bit the elements that really stick out to me are the verses, which have a slight air of mystery and discovery that I find compelling. Like a surprising self-diagnosis. I'm slightly disappointed in the Arrested the press sequence (delivery is good) just because it disrupts that flow and I like when Eddie's writing has a clear format with variations in each iteration (like the I Am Mine chorus).
But the chorus is really the highlight for me - the Vedderisms are good (it's strange these days when everyone else pays for someone else's mistakes is a very Eddie line), and the 'the blame takes shape' sequence is a nice riff on the dark matter imagery - something significant forming out of something substanceless and hidden - the invisible becoming visible, and how empowering it is to even see it, even if you can't do anything about it yet.
It's an idea that runs through a lot of their catalog - a legacy of their interest in Daniel Quinn for a while.
Do you mean that the "arrested the press" couplet is thematically jarring within the context of the song? I especially like that part.
No, it's thematically appropriate. I've got no problem with the lyrics as lyrics. But otherwise there is a common structure of
*Action taken against me
*Action taken against me
*....dark matter
a growing awareness of the ways in which they are being victimized and abused, and the language is internalizing and intimate.
Steal the light from our eyes
Drain the blood from our hearts
In all of this dark matter
Take the breath from our chest
Break the thoughts in our mind
We're losing time, dark matter
It's important that he's using we/us/our language - it's a political song and there is solidarity in being abused/mistreated.
The next time this shows up it's dealing more with social relationships between each other, but it follows the same structure.
Eroding away
We're pulling apart
In all of this dark matter
and then we get
I once heard it said
And it stuck in my head
Arrested the press
No one knows what happened next
which works in the context of the song's ideas - it's almost a concrete example of dark matter at work. But it does (for me) disrupt the flow and structure that had defined the verses earlier. I'd like another sequence like the ones we had gotten, or just abandoning the structure entirely for more concrete examples in part 1 and two. That it's not a three line sequence is also a little jarring.
Again, no problem with them as lyrics, but I personally really like it when lyrics are variations on a common structure, and I think Eddie does that well.