Here's something I wrote read it it's good
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Here's something I wrote read it it's good
Hey, I can write!
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I'll be the one in the lobby in the green fuck me shirt. The green one.
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
this is way more than six words... but your title is accurate. 
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
it is good but it's just the beginning
Vitalogist wrote:As a hotel manager, you can imagine the amount of beige I’ve seen in my career.
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
How does it end?knee tunes wrote:it is good but it's just the beginning
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
he figures out how to do itDscans wrote:How does it end?knee tunes wrote:it is good but it's just the beginning
the end
Vitalogist wrote:As a hotel manager, you can imagine the amount of beige I’ve seen in my career.
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
crappity crap.
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
i think there should be a time limit on editing a post. if more than a month has passed, tough. no editing allowed. and that's generous.
dammit
dammit
Dev wrote:you're delusional. you are a sad sad person. fuck off. you're mentally ill beyond repair. i don't need your shit. dissapear.
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
posting; life: lo mismo
Dev wrote:you're delusional. you are a sad sad person. fuck off. you're mentally ill beyond repair. i don't need your shit. dissapear.
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
If you want me to PM you the original post, all you have to do is ask.malice wrote:i think there should be a time limit on editing a post. if more than a month has passed, tough. no editing allowed. and that's generous.
dammit
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
I am the king
I bend syntax
I corrupt second thoughts.
Grammar is sexy.
Would you like long or short skirts with your cheesy bread?
The lumbar pain associated with playing steel guitar. It’s like we never consider the fortunate. Where would we be without the dollars
and sense of the stars that tell us to
disregard stars.
I ain’t no joke but neither is my mother
so lay off bro
before I wax your eyebrows.
Just kidding. I think
it’s going to rain on this fiesta
of history
I never cared for.
Guess where I’m going?
As soon as you answer you're wrong because
staying a step ahead
is my goal.
You’re fixed like a dog.
I write past the horizon. It’s the only
way to stay sane.
Awake, asleep, or in a haze. All I see is a blurry shard of glass
that cuts the way we think. Cut it. It feels good. You’ll
thank me like the visceral realists
that populate
the consciousness
of our pasty minds.
Come with me. I promise
to shake off all that you
ever kept holy. We create our own sadness,
no need to be told when.
I bend syntax
I corrupt second thoughts.
Grammar is sexy.
Would you like long or short skirts with your cheesy bread?
The lumbar pain associated with playing steel guitar. It’s like we never consider the fortunate. Where would we be without the dollars
and sense of the stars that tell us to
disregard stars.
I ain’t no joke but neither is my mother
so lay off bro
before I wax your eyebrows.
Just kidding. I think
it’s going to rain on this fiesta
of history
I never cared for.
Guess where I’m going?
As soon as you answer you're wrong because
staying a step ahead
is my goal.
You’re fixed like a dog.
I write past the horizon. It’s the only
way to stay sane.
Awake, asleep, or in a haze. All I see is a blurry shard of glass
that cuts the way we think. Cut it. It feels good. You’ll
thank me like the visceral realists
that populate
the consciousness
of our pasty minds.
Come with me. I promise
to shake off all that you
ever kept holy. We create our own sadness,
no need to be told when.
I'll be the one in the lobby in the green fuck me shirt. The green one.
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
Dscans wrote:Come with me. I promise
to shake off all that you
ever kept holy. We create our own sadness,
no need to be told when.

Malloy wrote:making this place inhospitable to posting is really the only move left.
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Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good
You have a gift for gifs my friend.
When you read that, make sure you use the hard G on "gif" for the alliteration effect. Also, because it's the right way.
When you read that, make sure you use the hard G on "gif" for the alliteration effect. Also, because it's the right way.
I'll be the one in the lobby in the green fuck me shirt. The green one.