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Here's something I wrote read it it's good

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Hey, I can write!
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this is way more than six words... but your title is accurate. :thumbsup:
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it is good but it's just the beginning
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knee tunes wrote:it is good but it's just the beginning
How does it end?
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Dscans wrote:
knee tunes wrote:it is good but it's just the beginning
How does it end?
he figures out how to do it

the end
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crappity crap.
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i think there should be a time limit on editing a post. if more than a month has passed, tough. no editing allowed. and that's generous.


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posting; life: lo mismo
Dev wrote:you're delusional. you are a sad sad person. fuck off. you're mentally ill beyond repair. i don't need your shit. dissapear.
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people change. people stay the same. people are so often disappointing - random PM, person unnamed
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malice wrote:i think there should be a time limit on editing a post. if more than a month has passed, tough. no editing allowed. and that's generous.


dammit
If you want me to PM you the original post, all you have to do is ask.
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I am the king
I bend syntax
I corrupt second thoughts.

Grammar is sexy.

Would you like long or short skirts with your cheesy bread?

The lumbar pain associated with playing steel guitar. It’s like we never consider the fortunate. Where would we be without the dollars
and sense of the stars that tell us to
disregard stars.

I ain’t no joke but neither is my mother
so lay off bro
before I wax your eyebrows.

Just kidding. I think
it’s going to rain on this fiesta
of history
I never cared for.

Guess where I’m going?
As soon as you answer you're wrong because
staying a step ahead
is my goal.

You’re fixed like a dog.

I write past the horizon. It’s the only
way to stay sane.

Awake, asleep, or in a haze. All I see is a blurry shard of glass
that cuts the way we think. Cut it. It feels good. You’ll
thank me like the visceral realists
that populate
the consciousness
of our pasty minds.

Come with me. I promise
to shake off all that you
ever kept holy. We create our own sadness,
no need to be told when.
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Dscans wrote:Come with me. I promise
to shake off all that you
ever kept holy. We create our own sadness,
no need to be told when.
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You have a gift for gifs my friend.
When you read that, make sure you use the hard G on "gif" for the alliteration effect. Also, because it's the right way.
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