Red Mosquito

PHATJ wrote:Stip: I think the last phrase may need a tweak or two also. I’m working on it.

PHATJ wrote:

Superblood Wolfmoon

Superblood Wolfmoon, took her away too soon
Superblood Wolfmoon, took her away too soon

I can hear you, sing in the distance
I can see you when I close my eyes

Once you were somewhere, and now you're everywhere
I'm feeling selfish and I want what's right

I ask for forgiveness, I'm begging myself
feeling angry, now get off the stage

Right now I feel, a lack of innocence searching for reveal
hypnotonic resonance I feel
not much of anything, and the cause is life or death

A life of hopelessness, focus on fucks all your focusedness
I've been hoping that a hope doesdies last
I don't know anything, I question everything
This life I love is going way too fast

Both my eyes are swollen
my face is broken
And I'm hopin that I hurt your
hopin that I hurt your
hopin that I hurt your fist

She was a stunner, and I am stunned
And the first thought or second thought was 'could be the one'
I was a prisoner, of keys and of cuffs
Yeah I was feeling fortunate to be locked up

But the world got to spinnin, always felt like it was ending
and love not withstanding we are each of us fucked

I'm in danger, feelin the distance
I can see you when I close my eyes
Once you were somewhere, and now you're everywhere
I'm feeling selfish and I want what's right

I ask for forgiveness, I'm begging myself
feelin angry now get off the stage

Superblood Wolfmoon, took her away too soon
Superblood Wolfmoon, took her away too soon
Superblood Wolfmoon, took her away too soon

I can hear you, seen sing in the distance
I can see you when I close my eyes
Once you were somewhere, and now you're everywhere
I'm feeling selfish and I want what's right

Focus on your focusness, to a life of hopeless’s
I've been hoping and I hope that lasts
I don't know anything, I question everything

This life I love is going way too fast

Edits for the header, stip

Anders wrote:Perhaps the moon is her.

Ms Harmless wrote:

Anders wrote:Perhaps the moon is her.

maybe! a SBWM involves an eclipse; the moon is visually taken away

is he metaphorically connecting the blood of the moon to the blood of the physical violence in the song?

Birds in Hell wrote:

Ms Harmless wrote:

Anders wrote:Perhaps the moon is her.

maybe! a SBWM involves an eclipse; the moon is visually taken away

is he metaphorically connecting the blood of the moon to the blood of the physical violence in the song?

Birds in Hell wrote:It was meant to be a light-hearted expression of my overwhelming lack of interest in lyrical interpretation.

stip wrote:

PHATJ wrote:Stip: I think the last phrase may need a tweak or two also. I’m working on it.

PHATJ wrote:

Superblood Wolfmoon

Superblood Wolfmoon, took her away too soon
Superblood Wolfmoon, took her away too soon

I can hear you, sing in the distance
I can see you when I close my eyes

Once you were somewhere, and now you're everywhere
I'm feeling selfish and I want what's right

I ask for forgiveness, I'm begging myself
feeling angry, now get off the stage

Right now I feel, a lack of innocence searching for reveal
hypnotonic resonance I feel
not much of anything, and the cause is life or death

A life of hopelessness, focus on fucks all your focusedness
I've been hoping that a hope doesdies last
I don't know anything, I question everything
This life I love is going way too fast

Both my eyes are swollen
my face is broken
And I'm hopin that I hurt your
hopin that I hurt your
hopin that I hurt your fist

She was a stunner, and I am stunned
And the first thought or second thought was 'could be the one'
I was a prisoner, of keys and of cuffs
Yeah I was feeling fortunate to be locked up

But the world got to spinnin, always felt like it was ending
and love not withstanding we are each of us fucked

I'm in danger, feelin the distance
I can see you when I close my eyes
Once you were somewhere, and now you're everywhere
I'm feeling selfish and I want what's right

I ask for forgiveness, I'm begging myself
feelin angry now get off the stage

Superblood Wolfmoon, took her away too soon
Superblood Wolfmoon, took her away too soon
Superblood Wolfmoon, took her away too soon

I can hear you, seen sing in the distance
I can see you when I close my eyes
Once you were somewhere, and now you're everywhere
I'm feeling selfish and I want what's right

Focus on your focusness, to a life of hopeless’s
I've been hoping and I hope that lasts
I don't know anything, I question everything

This life I love is going way too fast

Edits for the header, stip

I added a change - do others hear it?

cause=time wrote:Finally got around to listening the full song this morning.

The pre-release 18 second snippet had me interested, but the full track is forgettable. a run-of-the-mill pop/punk composition that have been pretty predictable since around riot act.

Anders wrote:There is no werewolf. They don't exist.

ghost wrote:So Chris Cornell is the werewolf?

Ms Harmless wrote:

Anders wrote:There is no werewolf. They don't exist.

does ghost exist?