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Oh man, I love this already. Such great '80s "dark kids movie" vibes. I eat that shit up. I keep imagining it as a beautifully hand-drawn animated movie with a measured pace, like The Secret of NIMH.

Small touch I think is great: giving the cats black speech bubbles.
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The cats freaking out from bowl of fake fruit made me laugh
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Jk I'll never read it
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But maybe start a "Verry Scurry" Reaction Thread" for the rest of these shmucks?
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Is "Skek" a reference to The Dark Crystal?
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lol "Kitty Krack"
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I absolutely love the first page of part III.
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The silhouette of the bird overhead, Pict holding on to a Christmas light. Wonderful, evocative details.
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Man, that was great. You might not like hearing this since I know we disagree a bunch, but there are some genuinely interesting ideas in there to me. Can't wait to see where it goes. Is book 2 out yet?
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Also,
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LoathedVermin72 wrote:Man, that was great. You might not like hearing this since I know we disagree a bunch, but there are some genuinely interesting ideas in there to me. Can't wait to see where it goes. Is book 2 out yet?
daw thanks. Book 2 is about a third of the way finished. Will hopefully finish it by September.

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yes. One of the cats is basically Dragon from NIMH too. That's the two main references I think.
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Read through my copy yesterday. Nice job, Burt. I especially like how the world feels more filled out with the little asides involving animals presumably unrelated to the main story.
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thanks brett
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