Red Mosquito

warehouse wrote:

harmless wrote:Seriously, if one of my posts is just an expansion on someone else making the same point, people need to start pulling them up on it rather than me.

yeah but your wording was perfect for "most RM post of all time"

Apparently you could say that about every post of mine.

harmless wrote:

warehouse wrote:

harmless wrote:Seriously, if one of my posts is just an expansion on someone else making the same point, people need to start pulling them up on it rather than me.

yeah but your wording was perfect for "most RM post of all time"

Apparently you could say that about every post of mine.

not really, no

harmless wrote:Anyway, "overwhelmed" wouldn't normally be hyphenated.

Yes. But in elementary school children are introduced to hyphens by using them divide words at the syllable level when they won't fit on a single line of paper. Seemed appropriate for lyrics at the level Sirens' are and a way to slip in a dick joke. I'll use proper grammer in our future posts.

theplatypus wrote:I didn't realize the line was "I can get over... whelmed." Now a bunch of posts suddenly make sense.

Anyway, not sure how I feel about that line.

I didn't really pick up on that lyric until i started seeing the posts

And I like how overwhelmed is delivered. It breaks up the presentation of what would otherwise be too wordy of a lyric

if I think too much I can get overwhelmed by the grace with which we live our lives with death over our shoulder

vs.

if i think too much I can get over
whelmed by the grace with which we live
our lives with death over our shoulder

All one sentence, but it's a nice sequence broken down into three parts. It wouldn't be if it was all gushed out at once.

broken iris wrote:

harmless wrote:Anyway, "overwhelmed" wouldn't normally be hyphenated.

Yes. But in elementary school children are introduced to hyphens by using them divide words at the syllable level when they won't fit on a single line of paper. Seemed appropriate for lyrics at the level Sirens' are and a way to slip in a dick joke. I'll use proper grammer in our future posts.

I didn't know kids were introduced to hyphens that way. That seems fairly silly.

stip wrote:And I like how overwhelmed is delivered. It breaks up the presentation of what would otherwise be too wordy of a lyric

if I think too much I can get overwhelmed by the grace with which we live our lives with death over our shoulder

vs.

if i think too much I can get over
whelmed by the grace with which we live
our lives with death over our shoulder

All one sentence, but it's a nice sequence broken down into three parts. It wouldn't be if it was all gushed out at once.

I can just envision several ways in which "overwhelmed" could be pronounced properly, with a space still left after it. I don't think they're mutually exclusive options. It's fine, though, I'm not that bothered by it.

stip wrote:And I like how overwhelmed is delivered. It breaks up the presentation of what would otherwise be too wordy of a lyric

if I think too much I can get overwhelmed by the grace with which we live our lives with death over our shoulder

vs.

if i think too much I can get over
whelmed by the grace with which we live
our lives with death over our shoulder

All one sentence, but it's a nice sequence broken down into three parts. It wouldn't be if it was all gushed out at once.

He rhymed "overwhelmed" with "shoulder". Makes me wish "shoulderwhelmed" was a word.

theplatypus wrote:

stip wrote:And I like how overwhelmed is delivered. It breaks up the presentation of what would otherwise be too wordy of a lyric

if I think too much I can get overwhelmed by the grace with which we live our lives with death over our shoulder

vs.

if i think too much I can get over
whelmed by the grace with which we live
our lives with death over our shoulder

All one sentence, but it's a nice sequence broken down into three parts. It wouldn't be if it was all gushed out at once.

He rhymed "overwhelmed" with "shoulder". Makes me wish "shoulderwhelmed" was a word.

needs more

groverwhelmed?

with death over our grover.

Frees up shoulder for shoulderwhelmed. Instant classic.

theplatypus wrote:

stip wrote:And I like how overwhelmed is delivered. It breaks up the presentation of what would otherwise be too wordy of a lyric

if I think too much I can get overwhelmed by the grace with which we live our lives with death over our shoulder

vs.

if i think too much I can get over
whelmed by the grace with which we live
our lives with death over our shoulder

All one sentence, but it's a nice sequence broken down into three parts. It wouldn't be if it was all gushed out at once.

He rhymed "overwhelmed" with "shoulder". Makes me wish "shoulderwhelmed" was a word.

Yup.

four-leaf cloverwhelmed

technically I think he's rhyming over with shoulder, but I think we can all agree that not only Sirens, but any song, would be improved by having the word groverwhelmed in it.

Also I'd like it if, in "I studied your face," he changed 'face' to 'race.'

It would really have done amazing things to the Sky I Scrape analysis, I think.

This thread has taken a good turn.

I keep thinking of "I studded your face." Then it becomes a song between a body piercer and his client.

stip wrote:And I like how overwhelmed is delivered. It breaks up the presentation of what would otherwise be too wordy of a lyric

if I think too much I can get overwhelmed by the grace with which we live our lives with death over our shoulder

vs.

if i think too much I can get over
whelmed by the grace with which we live
our lives with death over our shoulder

All one sentence, but it's a nice sequence broken down into three parts. It wouldn't be if it was all gushed out at once.

It also plays off the first time the pre-chorus was played.
"someday we'll be over"
I actually really like the breaking up of overwhelmed.
This song rules for me. The music isn't ground breaking, but the lyrics and Ed's delivery of them makes this song. It does help that the lyrics speak to me. I can relate to where Ed is coming from in my own life. It's not cheesy to me because I think Ed is authentic in his emotion.

Yeah this is a great song. I don't feel the elements of it are that foreign to a lot of things Pearl Jam has done in the past as some have suggested.

harmless wrote:I am harmless.

This may be the only post we need to save when we commemorate the Lightning Bolt era. Reading this was a beautiful moment for me.