Re: Yellow Moon
Posted: Fri October 11, 2013 8:51 pm
I wanna punch you in the 3rd face.ABNorman wrote:Yellow Moon is the weakest song on this album.
*disappears into the distance
I wanna punch you in the 3rd face.ABNorman wrote:Yellow Moon is the weakest song on this album.
*disappears into the distance
That's why it's good.ABNorman wrote:It's just got no hook, you guys.
"It doesn't have a hook, therefore it's good" is exactly the kind of silly reasoning RM gets criticised (rightly) for.harmless wrote:That's why it's good.ABNorman wrote:It's just got no hook, you guys.
I like the bridge, but the rest doesn't do anything for me.harmless wrote:It's good for other reasons too though.
If I ran away naked, there'd be a "Yellow moon" joke in there somewhere.Thejambi wrote:Im gunna Yellow Moon your ass to hell!
I guess my main problem is the "chorus". Even though it's only a few words, it feels too stretched out and forced. I could warm to the verses if the chorus was better.harmless wrote:Yeah I was gonna mention the bridge. I don't need to tell you that you can always trust PJ to write a decent bridge if nothing else
The chorus isn't amazing. I wish Ed had done more with that melody. All I can say is that I think it brings a nice moroseness to the proceedings. The song is meant to have that melancholy contrast of beautiful and dark.ABNorman wrote:I guess my main problem is the "chorus". Even though it's only a few words, it feels too stretched out and forced. I could warm to the verses if the chorus was better.harmless wrote:Yeah I was gonna mention the bridge. I don't need to tell you that you can always trust PJ to write a decent bridge if nothing else
I think the music is very well put together, but vocal melody is about 60% of my enjoyment of a song - I hopped on the Pearl Jam train because it felt like Eddie was talking to and about me - so if that doesn't work for me, it drags the song down. I feel like that's why I'm not a Riot Act fan - there's a deliberate lack of melody on that album.harmless wrote:The chorus isn't amazing. I wish Ed had done more with that melody. All I can say is that I think it brings a nice moroseness to the proceedings. The song is meant to have that melancholy contrast of beautiful and dark.ABNorman wrote:I guess my main problem is the "chorus". Even though it's only a few words, it feels too stretched out and forced. I could warm to the verses if the chorus was better.harmless wrote:Yeah I was gonna mention the bridge. I don't need to tell you that you can always trust PJ to write a decent bridge if nothing else
I didn't comment on "Help Help" and "Cropduster" in your 2000 list - we're all different hereMike wrote:Saying Yellow Moon is the weakest song on the album is where freedom of speech ends.
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Yeah, I'm just joking around.ABNorman wrote:I didn't comment on "Help Help" and "Cropduster" in your 2000 list - we're all different hereMike wrote:Saying Yellow Moon is the weakest song on the album is where freedom of speech ends.
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That, plus Guybrush Threepwood gets you a pass in most matters. I hope you backed Broken Age.
harmless wrote:I want to play Monkey Island
I am rubber, you are glue.ABNorman wrote: I didn't comment on "Help Help" and "Cropduster" in your 2000 list.