Re: Song of the Moment: My Father's Son
Posted: Sat August 13, 2022 6:43 pm
I hear that
the Comes Then Goes re-ordering of words to fit the rhyme scheme is less annoying to me than literally deleting words so it'll scan when he could have just chosen another damn sentence, but they are both textbook bad writing
even way-back-when, he was doing this, though (aside from some middle period stuff where he just kind of had a very good lyrical time, somehow)
of artists from that era, I always considered Adam Duritz to be the one I went to for lyrics
the Comes Then Goes re-ordering of words to fit the rhyme scheme is less annoying to me than literally deleting words so it'll scan when he could have just chosen another damn sentence, but they are both textbook bad writing
even way-back-when, he was doing this, though (aside from some middle period stuff where he just kind of had a very good lyrical time, somehow)
of artists from that era, I always considered Adam Duritz to be the one I went to for lyrics