Re: Getaway
Posted: Sun September 15, 2013 6:34 am
phew, lucky you said it with confidence.
lol96583UP wrote:Can the next album producer at least just tell Ed to shut up a bit more when they are playing? He just never shuts up anymore. Its like boogie-woogie-doo-dah day all fucking day.
funny and true.Birds in Hell wrote:lol96583UP wrote:Can the next album producer at least just tell Ed to shut up a bit more when they are playing? He just never shuts up anymore. Its like boogie-woogie-doo-dah day all fucking day.
I suspect this guy is just stip making a second account so he finally has evidence of this kind of post happening.96583UP wrote:Are PJ fans that dumb now? Or is it that PJ does once again have mass appeal, and the tyranny of the majority with their lack of discriminating taste are just gobbling up whatever is bird-dumped into their mouth
I don't see a hater. I see a very frustrated fan who just pressed stop on his record player in the middle of "Last Exit" to listen to new leaks and... naturally went ape shit mad at his favorite band.harmless wrote:The irony is that this hater is actually very articulate for a troll, but has a dumbass username consisting of numbers.
Who are you writing for now? Who's house style is that?theplatypus wrote:I can say with confidence that this is my least favorite of the leaked tracks. The verses are okay but that fucking chorus is a sickly, undergrown seedling plucked right out of the near-barren tundra of spiritless and ordinary pop rock. I'll revisit it when a better quality file comes along, but this is my opinion after 3 listens.
Walker Bait wrote:I know what you mean..if "Anna Molly" and "Black Heart Inertia" went to a listening party for their last album "If Not Now When" and went home and wrote a song this would be it.Gob wrote:No song in particular, but the style and delivery reminds me of later Incubus.delanoche wrote:I like this song, and I've got nothing against Incubus, but I don't hear it. Though I guess I only know earlier Incubus. Is there any specific song you could point to?Gob wrote:This totally sounds like an Incubus song to me.
harmless wrote:Who are you writing for now? Who's house style is that?theplatypus wrote:I can say with confidence that this is my least favorite of the leaked tracks. The verses are okay but that fucking chorus is a sickly, undergrown seedling plucked right out of the near-barren tundra of spiritless and ordinary pop rock. I'll revisit it when a better quality file comes along, but this is my opinion after 3 listens.
Hopefully Jorge knows I was kidding, I just LOL'd at the metaphor.WtOB? wrote:harmless wrote:Who are you writing for now? Who's house style is that?theplatypus wrote:I can say with confidence that this is my least favorite of the leaked tracks. The verses are okay but that fucking chorus is a sickly, undergrown seedling plucked right out of the near-barren tundra of spiritless and ordinary pop rock. I'll revisit it when a better quality file comes along, but this is my opinion after 3 listens.this is an internet forum, not a magazine article with horrible readability.
it started out as a nice metaphor until he got out of control with "near-barren tundra" (tundras are always near-barren, you're just looking to use as many words as possible to impress yourself) and go with either "spiritless" or "ordinary", using both here was again just looking for as many words as possible which ultimately has killed any flow the sentence and metaphor had at the beginning. don't be such a pretentious douche bag. more words don't make it better. in fact, this is poor writing because of too many adjectives. write on an internet forum like a normal person, unless you're actually a good writer which you're not.harmless wrote:Hopefully Jorge knows I was kidding, I just LOL'd at the metaphor.WtOB? wrote:harmless wrote:Who are you writing for now? Who's house style is that?theplatypus wrote:I can say with confidence that this is my least favorite of the leaked tracks. The verses are okay but that fucking chorus is a sickly, undergrown seedling plucked right out of the near-barren tundra of spiritless and ordinary pop rock. I'll revisit it when a better quality file comes along, but this is my opinion after 3 listens.this is an internet forum, not a magazine article with horrible readability.
Jorge's a great writer, I'm just glad he promotes his blog and music-writing instead of his RM posts.WtOB? wrote:it started out as a nice metaphor until he got out of control with "near-barren tundra" (tundras are always near-barren, you're just looking to use as many words as possible to impress yourself) and go with either "spiritless" or "ordinary", using both here was again just looking for as many words as possible which ultimately has killed any flow the sentence and metaphor had at the beginning. don't be such a pretentious douche bag. more words don't make it better. in fact, this is poor writing because of too many adjectives. write on an internet forum like a normal person, unless you're actually a good writer which you're not.harmless wrote:Hopefully Jorge knows I was kidding, I just LOL'd at the metaphor.WtOB? wrote:harmless wrote:Who are you writing for now? Who's house style is that?theplatypus wrote:I can say with confidence that this is my least favorite of the leaked tracks. The verses are okay but that fucking chorus is a sickly, undergrown seedling plucked right out of the near-barren tundra of spiritless and ordinary pop rock. I'll revisit it when a better quality file comes along, but this is my opinion after 3 listens.this is an internet forum, not a magazine article with horrible readability.
well that particular quote isn't great writing at all. which is fine, but it comes across as if it's supposed to be.harmless wrote:Jorge's a great writer, I'm just glad he promotes his blog and music-writing instead of his RM posts.WtOB? wrote:it started out as a nice metaphor until he got out of control with "near-barren tundra" (tundras are always near-barren, you're just looking to use as many words as possible to impress yourself) and go with either "spiritless" or "ordinary", using both here was again just looking for as many words as possible which ultimately has killed any flow the sentence and metaphor had at the beginning. don't be such a pretentious douche bag. more words don't make it better. in fact, this is poor writing because of too many adjectives. write on an internet forum like a normal person, unless you're actually a good writer which you're not.harmless wrote:Hopefully Jorge knows I was kidding, I just LOL'd at the metaphor.WtOB? wrote:harmless wrote:Who are you writing for now? Who's house style is that?theplatypus wrote:I can say with confidence that this is my least favorite of the leaked tracks. The verses are okay but that fucking chorus is a sickly, undergrown seedling plucked right out of the near-barren tundra of spiritless and ordinary pop rock. I'll revisit it when a better quality file comes along, but this is my opinion after 3 listens.this is an internet forum, not a magazine article with horrible readability.
Don't they all? I mean DON'T THEY ALL? I write so much in this forum because I secretly hope some music magazine / journal has talent scouts scanning the Internet for new journalists.WtOB? wrote:well that particular quote isn't great writing at all. which is fine, but it comes across as if it's supposed to be.harmless wrote:Jorge's a great writer, I'm just glad he promotes his blog and music-writing instead of his RM posts.WtOB? wrote:it started out as a nice metaphor until he got out of control with "near-barren tundra" (tundras are always near-barren, you're just looking to use as many words as possible to impress yourself) and go with either "spiritless" or "ordinary", using both here was again just looking for as many words as possible which ultimately has killed any flow the sentence and metaphor had at the beginning. don't be such a pretentious douche bag. more words don't make it better. in fact, this is poor writing because of too many adjectives. write on an internet forum like a normal person, unless you're actually a good writer which you're not.harmless wrote:Hopefully Jorge knows I was kidding, I just LOL'd at the metaphor.WtOB? wrote:harmless wrote:Who are you writing for now? Who's house style is that?theplatypus wrote:I can say with confidence that this is my least favorite of the leaked tracks. The verses are okay but that fucking chorus is a sickly, undergrown seedling plucked right out of the near-barren tundra of spiritless and ordinary pop rock. I'll revisit it when a better quality file comes along, but this is my opinion after 3 listens.this is an internet forum, not a magazine article with horrible readability.
He... is... Ed?!WtOB? wrote:it started out as a nice metaphor until he got out of control with "near-barren tundra" (tundras are always near-barren, you're just looking to use as many words as possible to impress yourself) and go with either "spiritless" or "ordinary", using both here was again just looking for as many words as possible...
i'd recruit you, harmy.harmless wrote:Don't they all? I mean DON'T THEY ALL? I write so much in this forum because I secretly hope some music magazine / journal has talent scouts scanning the Internet for new journalists.WtOB? wrote:well that particular quote isn't great writing at all. which is fine, but it comes across as if it's supposed to be.harmless wrote:Jorge's a great writer, I'm just glad he promotes his blog and music-writing instead of his RM posts.WtOB? wrote:it started out as a nice metaphor until he got out of control with "near-barren tundra" (tundras are always near-barren, you're just looking to use as many words as possible to impress yourself) and go with either "spiritless" or "ordinary", using both here was again just looking for as many words as possible which ultimately has killed any flow the sentence and metaphor had at the beginning. don't be such a pretentious douche bag. more words don't make it better. in fact, this is poor writing because of too many adjectives. write on an internet forum like a normal person, unless you're actually a good writer which you're not.harmless wrote:Hopefully Jorge knows I was kidding, I just LOL'd at the metaphor.WtOB? wrote:harmless wrote:Who are you writing for now? Who's house style is that?theplatypus wrote:I can say with confidence that this is my least favorite of the leaked tracks. The verses are okay but that fucking chorus is a sickly, undergrown seedling plucked right out of the near-barren tundra of spiritless and ordinary pop rock. I'll revisit it when a better quality file comes along, but this is my opinion after 3 listens.this is an internet forum, not a magazine article with horrible readability.