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Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Thu March 21, 2013 11:10 am
by Dscans
Hey, I can write!

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Thu March 21, 2013 11:21 am
by elliseamos
this is way more than six words... but your title is accurate. :thumbsup:

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Fri March 22, 2013 7:58 am
by knee tunes
it is good but it's just the beginning

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Fri March 22, 2013 1:17 pm
by Dscans
knee tunes wrote:it is good but it's just the beginning
How does it end?

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Sat March 23, 2013 6:53 pm
by knee tunes
Dscans wrote:
knee tunes wrote:it is good but it's just the beginning
How does it end?
he figures out how to do it

the end

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Sat March 29, 2014 5:24 am
by Dscans
crappity crap.

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Sat March 29, 2014 6:03 pm
by malice
i think there should be a time limit on editing a post. if more than a month has passed, tough. no editing allowed. and that's generous.


dammit

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Sat March 29, 2014 6:05 pm
by malice
posting; life: lo mismo

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Sun March 30, 2014 7:57 pm
by Dscans
malice wrote:i think there should be a time limit on editing a post. if more than a month has passed, tough. no editing allowed. and that's generous.


dammit
If you want me to PM you the original post, all you have to do is ask.

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Sat April 19, 2014 5:23 am
by Dscans
I am the king
I bend syntax
I corrupt second thoughts.

Grammar is sexy.

Would you like long or short skirts with your cheesy bread?

The lumbar pain associated with playing steel guitar. It’s like we never consider the fortunate. Where would we be without the dollars
and sense of the stars that tell us to
disregard stars.

I ain’t no joke but neither is my mother
so lay off bro
before I wax your eyebrows.

Just kidding. I think
it’s going to rain on this fiesta
of history
I never cared for.

Guess where I’m going?
As soon as you answer you're wrong because
staying a step ahead
is my goal.

You’re fixed like a dog.

I write past the horizon. It’s the only
way to stay sane.

Awake, asleep, or in a haze. All I see is a blurry shard of glass
that cuts the way we think. Cut it. It feels good. You’ll
thank me like the visceral realists
that populate
the consciousness
of our pasty minds.

Come with me. I promise
to shake off all that you
ever kept holy. We create our own sadness,
no need to be told when.

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Mon May 05, 2014 5:49 pm
by Alex
Dscans wrote:Come with me. I promise
to shake off all that you
ever kept holy. We create our own sadness,
no need to be told when.
Image

Re: Here's something I wrote read it it's good

Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 12:17 am
by Dscans
You have a gift for gifs my friend.
When you read that, make sure you use the hard G on "gif" for the alliteration effect. Also, because it's the right way.