Red Mosquito

Very subpar acting, camerawork, writing, etc...

tree_ wrote:Very subpar acting, camerawork, writing, etc...

both of them? argo loves the one i posted

Both bad but first ones worse

tree_ wrote:Both bad but first ones worse

what do we do now?

Teach comedy. Loud and fast!

tree_ wrote:Teach comedy. Loud and fast!

i watched the first one again...so bad

i'm not sure i could do better though

Loud and fast masks poor material. Look at Friends and every other shitty sitcom ever.

i dunno, i think my skit is better than that second one. it has one joke that it retells over and over and has a predictable punchline. i find unpredictable or unexpected turns funnier. but by all means boys, tell me how it's done.

tree_ wrote:Loud and fast masks poor material.

how was it loud? and it wasn't fast until the end. calm down.

It wasn't. Look, I appreciate you trying to do something but I'm sorry, it just isn't loud and fast enough.

Nicely done but my advice is to invest in some sound equipment, the sound really hurts it. Especially the opening scene

not enough nudity, for one

theplatypus wrote:Nicely done but my advice is to invest in some sound equipment, the sound really hurts it. Especially the opening scene

cheers brew, any suggestions on how to deal with a windy day like that? i have a somewhat acceptable rode video mic but probably would have been better to just shoot on a less windy day if i had time.

Don't set yourself up by calling yourself hilarious. Take j Seinfeld's advice. If you'd have said it sucks I might've liked it...

sorry i will keep the ironic thread titles to a minimum next time to make sure you don’t miss anything.

why did the girl at the picnic table ask what the love interest's name is?

because it makes no sense.

WtOB? wrote:because it makes no sense.

hmm...ok

it'd probably be funnier if she said that after goofy walking guy said they were friends with the blonde