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ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Wed February 16, 2022 10:08 pm
by Ms Harmless
The Haves

when we wake up,
it just might be
the first of many blows
that we'll receive

but today,
what we need, it can wait;
we have what we need

we'll want what we need;
we'll need what's above;
we'll find ourselves reaching
for safety above;
but today, we're enough

all of The Haves,
they could not
hold a candle
to what we've got;
they want what's ours,
I just want you;
please try to trust me,
I beg of you

I wish that you knew
that I know
when you're hurting;
after all these years, I know

this light synthesis,
where we share
every one of our senses;
we swim the same

unconditional love
has been our sin;
but that's said and done

we'll need what we need;
we'll need what's above,
we'll see ourselves reaching
for safety above;
but today, we're enough

all of The Haves,
they could not
hold a candle
to what we've got;
the ceiling so high
when you're down on the floor,
just to claw at some air
is fucking crippling, sure

all those yesterdays ago,
when we should have met;
so hard, so hard
not to drown in regret;
but look up; we have
a long stretch of life
and love to live yet

we'll need what we need;
we'll need what's above,
we'll find ourselves reaching
for safety above;
but today, we're enough

all of The Haves,
they could not
hold a candle
to what we've got;
they want what's ours,
I just want you;
please try to trust me,
I beg of you

all of The Haves,
with all that they do;
let's flip a finger:
"fucker, fuck you"

"fucker, fuck you"

"fucker, fuck you"

they ain't got us

(music pauses - Stone introduces a heavier riff for a repeated refrain section)

home is where The Haves are (x4)

FIN

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Wed February 16, 2022 10:10 pm
by Anders
No siamese twins feeling every sense, that is a huge improvement.

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Wed February 16, 2022 10:20 pm
by Ms Harmless
took me ages :haha:

I just be wanting more from this song, but I have what it means to me :smile:

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Wed February 16, 2022 10:21 pm
by Anders
Well done.

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Wed February 16, 2022 10:23 pm
by The Argonaut
I don't even know what the real lyrics are, but I'm certain these are better

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Wed February 16, 2022 10:25 pm
by Anders
Blessed child, may you never know.

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Wed February 16, 2022 10:27 pm
by Ms Harmless
LOL feel free to use mine

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 12:54 am
by Tj
Those are much better

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 12:56 am
by Ms Harmless
:heartbeat:

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 1:10 am
by Jorge
Now it just needs a new melody and chords and arrangement and production and performance

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 1:11 am
by Ms Harmless
Jorge wrote:Now it just needs a new melody and chords and arrangement and production and performance
I KNEW YOU WOULD DO THIS!

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 1:13 am
by Ms Harmless
I would like it to sound like Spin Doctors

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 1:24 am
by Jorge
One two, rich folks stand before you
they're called the Haves now
rich folks, rich folks who deplore you
now how bout that now

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 7:12 am
by Higgs
I'm always happy for a blow when I wake up...

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 9:42 am
by Ms Harmless
Higgs wrote:I'm always happy for a blow when I wake up...
eeeey!

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 9:43 am
by Ms Harmless
Jorge wrote:One two, rich folks stand before you
they're called the Haves now
rich folks, rich folks who deplore you
now how bout that now
perfect, now let's add another section

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 1:36 pm
by stip
Jorge wrote:One two, rich folks stand before you
they're called the Haves now
rich folks, rich folks who deplore you
now how bout that now
:lol:

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 2:40 pm
by Jorge
Sia-youse, or Sia-mese
I feel all your senses baby can't you see
I ain't got no future or family tree
But I know what a Have or lover ought to be
I know what a Have or lover ought to be

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 4:19 pm
by Ms Harmless
LOL

Re: ITT: I rewrite The Haves

Posted: Thu February 17, 2022 5:04 pm
by Brett
Outstanding work in this thread from Ms Harmless and Jorge. Maybe we can get the sequel song "The Haves, Part Two (Princes)" when all is said and done here.