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inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 11, 2013 12:35 am
by malice
http://forums.theskyiscrape.com/viewtop ... 9&start=20
just
thought
id
show
it
of
well
not
show
it
of
as
such
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 11, 2013 2:53 am
by malice
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 11, 2013 11:27 am
by WtOB?
malice wrote:http://forums.theskyiscrape.com/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=1069&start=20
just
thought
id
show
it
of
well
not
show
it
of
as
such

i love that.
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Mon August 12, 2013 3:14 am
by malice
WtOB? wrote:malice wrote:http://forums.theskyiscrape.com/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=1069&start=20
just
thought
id
show
it
of
well
not
show
it
of
as
such

i love that.
I keep reading it out loud. one word at a time. it's very odd.
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Mon August 12, 2013 3:15 am
by malice
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Mon August 12, 2013 4:40 am
by epilogue
cutuphalfdead wrote:Lenny is a lot like that feather in Forest Gump.
- Spoiler: show
- Filthy and disease ridden.
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Tue August 13, 2013 1:36 am
by malice
where's nah?
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Tue August 13, 2013 3:04 am
by epilogue
I'm sure it's my fault.
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Tue August 13, 2013 3:33 am
by malice
durdencommatyler wrote:I'm sure it's my fault.
like, duh!
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:21 am
by malice
my kid tried to fight another kid, and I explained to him that
the other kid just seems like a dick because he has autism
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:21 am
by malice
gomp gomp
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:22 am
by malice
moved: eating paint
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:22 am
by malice
I know that's less fair in the middle of the night
but get over it
they're just words.
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:23 am
by Norah
malice wrote:I know that's less fair in the middle of the night
but get over it
they're just words.

Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:24 am
by malice
Well, I'm sorry
I announced it in the beginning
If we would have discussed it earlier we could have changed it
But it is what it is now
inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:25 am
by malice
maybe not so inadvertent...
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:28 am
by Whitey McTeeth
This thread is like kisses from a puppy.
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:31 am
by Norah
You said I sucked at running a tourney.
You mocked me.
And said I was a fruit cake for wearing velour
(it was just a thin sweatshirt).
Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:34 am
by malice
Poopycock, my good lad! The soundness of the structures in question notwithstanding, the question is blatantly metaphorical. There is an existential undercurrent that runs through it, and is meant to clash with the emphasis on common, or everyday, imagery. By jumping from house to potato, quite unexpectedly, we are provided with both a new perspective and something of a system shock. We are forced to revisit our entire understanding of potato as we know it.
What does it mean to be potato? Does potato automatically equate to value? Mayonnaise seems to have value, I would think. But here it is rejected by an undefinable force known only to the author. It is not, for whatever reason, potato. And what of the reduced moral judgment of the potato's inhabitant life form. Is the life form really us? If so, what can we read from its fallible and ambiguously delicate state? Perhaps we are all, ultimately, mayonnaise. And if so, are we all destined for rejection?
Or perhaps the potato important because its common. After all, the malt shop was common not so long ago. Now, it is an obscurity...a thing which exists only in minds and tongue-in-cheek mock-ups. Is there no malt shop? Look around you! It's gone! And should we not take a moment to lament the loss of what once was common? The author's decision to avoid this question is an interesting choice. It contains no inherent emotion. One could read indifference into it, I suppose. But one could just as easily see frustration, or even joy. The emotion we bring to the phrase is, perhaps, our very own.
In a way, IS THERE NO MALT SHOP represents the most important question any of us will ever ask.
malice wrote: :wothy:
aka -

Re: inadvertent RMer poetry
Posted: Sun August 18, 2013 1:35 am
by malice
Whitey McTeeth wrote:This thread is like kisses from a puppy.
sans teeth, even